please check each photo if its correct or I have to change the wordings. Thanks :)
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whitney.zelig@gmail.com
yes
Jonnamae
can we add these to the menu
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Jonnamae Jumawan
whitney.zelig@gmail.com
, is the category correct?
BODY COOLSCUPTING SCULPSURE ULTRASONIC CAVITATION VELASHAPE III VELASHAPE CELLULITE REDUCTION LASER HAIR REMOVAL
FACE ULTRASONIC FACIALS PHOTOFACIAL SILKPEEL MICRODERMABRASION MICRONEEDLING SCLEROTHERAPY ELECTROLYSIS LAMPROBE
MEDICAL BOTOX AND FILLERS OZONE SAUNA
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whitney.zelig@gmail.com
Not sure. What do u think
Melissa
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Hector
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Hector Mota,Operations Manager
Looks legit to me. Are they arranged by most popular, commonly used or what?
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Melissa Zelig
Velashape - smooth sexier figure. "sexier" is not a great word to use. According to consumer data, most customers are most interested into fitting in to clothes better. Also you biggest demographic is 40 years +
The best converting ads list the main benefit of the procedure. So the ad saying for velashape, "body contouring + cellulite treatment" has a much better tagline.
Photofacial ad "tight, firm, smooth skin." does not accurately reflect the treatment. Photofacials are predominately to reverse skin damage. The most popular application is to remove brown spots. So you could do something like "Remove brown spots + improve skin tone & texture"
Schelerotherapy
You may run into a google ad policy issue with the word "remove veins" for vein treatments, it is best to list the two main concerns (spider veins and varicose veins) So something like "Non-surgical reduction of spider veins + varicose veins" Or "target vericose + spider veins." You can use the word removal but it could get flagged, just going off previous experience.
ELECTROLYSIS With electrolysis you can be more aggresive with your wording because it is the only treatment FDA cleared for "permanent hair removal." Remove unwanted facial hair permanently."
Good job targeting facial hair. One other big thing about electrolysis is that because it is not light based it is safe on all skin colors and effective on all shades of hair.
Lamprobe
Creating flawless skin...
I think this is the brand's tagline, but in my opinion its a terrible tagline. No one knows what the lamprobe is. Creating flawless skin does not distinguish what the lamprobe does. This, IMO, is a much better tagline
"Remove bumps, tags, and other skin blemishes"
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Jonnamae Jumawan
Thank you
Melissa
, Ill take note these for future graphics.
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1TK1Qvq5whxjNrtclcHmIRTJiKoB0aD387PsTy8wSooM/edit#gid=1766837437
please check each photo if its correct or I have to change the wordings. Thanks :)
BODY
COOLSCUPTING
SCULPSURE
ULTRASONIC CAVITATION
VELASHAPE III
VELASHAPE CELLULITE REDUCTION
LASER HAIR REMOVAL
FACE
ULTRASONIC FACIALS
PHOTOFACIAL
SILKPEEL
MICRODERMABRASION
MICRONEEDLING
SCLEROTHERAPY
ELECTROLYSIS
LAMPROBE
MEDICAL
BOTOX AND FILLERS
OZONE SAUNA
Are they arranged by most popular, commonly used or what?
"sexier" is not a great word to use. According to consumer data, most customers are most interested into fitting in to clothes better. Also you biggest demographic is 40 years +
The best converting ads list the main benefit of the procedure. So the ad saying for velashape, "body contouring + cellulite treatment" has a much better tagline.
Photofacial ad "tight, firm, smooth skin." does not accurately reflect the treatment. Photofacials are predominately to reverse skin damage. The most popular application is to remove brown spots. So you could do something like
"Remove brown spots + improve skin tone & texture"
Schelerotherapy
You may run into a google ad policy issue with the word "remove veins" for vein treatments, it is best to list the two main concerns (spider veins and varicose veins)
So something like "Non-surgical reduction of spider veins + varicose veins"
Or "target vericose + spider veins."
You can use the word removal but it could get flagged, just going off previous experience.
ELECTROLYSIS
With electrolysis you can be more aggresive with your wording because it is the only treatment FDA cleared for "permanent hair removal." Remove unwanted facial hair permanently."
Good job targeting facial hair. One other big thing about electrolysis is that because it is not light based it is safe on all skin colors and effective on all shades of hair.
Lamprobe
Creating flawless skin...
I think this is the brand's tagline, but in my opinion its a terrible tagline. No one knows what the lamprobe is. Creating flawless skin does not distinguish what the lamprobe does.
This, IMO, is a much better tagline
"Remove bumps, tags, and other skin blemishes"
they have 2 Velashape pages:
https://go.bellocorpomedspa.com/services/body-contouring/velashape-iii/
https://go.bellocorpomedspa.com/services/skin-tightening/velashape-cellulite-reduction/
done adding to menu