Boulder Halo Video #2 1080x1920.mp4 55.9 MB • Download

Brittany Here you go

Hannah  What do you think? Do you think we should try to slow it down a little or keep it as is? Do you like the blurbs?

Brittany I think the speed is okay/ goes with the music. Can we make the blurbs appear more interesting when they come on the screen as far as animation?

Thinking out loud for these 2...
1. Instead of reduce hyperpigmentation we could put reduce sun damage since summer is almost over

2. I looked more into Halo and saw "The HALO treatment is more comfortable with less downtime than traditional fractional resurfacing." so maybe we could have a small blurb similar so people know how Halo is different

Elsa Please replace the caption "reduce hyperpigmentation" with "reduce sun damage + discoloration"

Can you also add this caption after "shrink enlarged pores"

more comfortable + less downtime
than other fractional resurfacing treatments

Can you also make the captions a little more exciting? Maybe add some animation

Boulder Halo Video #2 1080x1920.mp4 58.6 MB • Download

Brittany Let me know you thoughts

Hannah  What do you think? I don't love the gold arrow but I like the pink paint splash looking background (though I think we should make it purple to match the site)

Brittany - kind of a lot happening with the different colors.  I don't know if I like the yellow arrow. This might be too many words at once but I feel like..

More comfort + Less downtime should be with the next sentence of "than other fractional resurfacing treatments"

Maybe we put:
More comfort + Less Downtime than a sec or 2 after this sentence goes underneath it:
compared to traditional fractional resurfacing in a different color or the splash paint background

Elsa Can you please slow down the clip just a little bit more?

Can you please get rid of the pink splashes and use the arrows instead? Not on every clip, but where you see fit. Please make the arrows this color: #845297

Boulder Halo Video #2 1080x1920.mp4 59.1 MB • Download

Brittany Here's the revision let me know your thoughts

Brittany  I like the purple way more

Elsa  Thank you! Please make the other size

Boulder Halo Video #2 1080x1920.mp4 44.7 MB • Download

Boulder Halo Video #2 1080x1080.mp4 52.6 MB • Download

Brittany Here's the slowed version of both size

Elsa  For the 1080x1080 version, can you make "wrinkles" in "minimize lines + wrinkles" a little smaller so the i, k, and l aren't touching the line above? It should look more like the next caption that has good spacing between it (improve skin tone + texture)

Boulder Halo Video #2 1080x1080.mp4 43.9 MB • Download

Brittany Sorry that was my bad, here's the revision