Hi
Elsa
Can you make three different videos for me using the clips and captions below?
Video #1:
Please start at the 1:31 mark and go to the 1:44 mark. (Use captions:
Freeze Fat with CoolSculpting Elite.
the world's #1 non-surgical fat reduction treatment
target stubborn fat resistant to diet and exercise
Start again at the 1:45 mark and go to the 1:58 mark. (Use the captions of what she is saying until she says "manageable," then add a caption over the part with the machine that says: frozen fat cells are removed from the body for good
Start again at the 2:15 mark and go to the 2:38 mark. (Use captions of what she is saying during this part. Don't cut to the chair. If possible, cut to the next clip and have her voice carry over onto it as she finishes her sentence.)
Start again at the 4:40 mark and go to the 4:45 mark. (For this section, use the caption: Look and feel better than ever.)
Start again at the 5:05 mark and go to the 5:17 mark. (Use the captions of what she is saying during this part, ending with "feel my best."
Then you can do a fade to a solid background with the caption: Discover CoolSculpting Elite. Schedule a Consultation.
Video #2:
Start at the 1:15 mark and go to the 1:17 mark.
Start again at the 1:21 mark and go to the 1:30 mark.
Start again at the 1:46 mark and go to the 1:50 mark.
Start again at the 1:31 mark and go to the 1:38 mark.
Start again at the 3:50 mark and go to the 3:55 mark.
Start again at the 4:38 mark and go to the 4:44 mark.
Start again at the 4:53 mark and go to the 4:57 mark.
Start again at the 5:04 mark and go to the 5:10 mark.
Please use these captions for this video:
Freeze away stubborn fat with CoolSculpting Elite
the world's #1 non-surgical fat reduction treatment
say goodbye to stubborn fat bulges
that won't go away with diet & exercise
frozen fat cells are removed for good
non-invasively
with little to no downtime
quick, convenient treatments
long-lasting, natural-looking results
only at the best medspa
discover the benefits CoolSculpting Elite
Schedule a Consultation
Video #3
Start at the 1:22 mark and go to the 1:35 mark.
Start at the 1:39 mark where she says "I am a gym addict" and go to the 2:22 mark.
Start again at the 1:33 mark and go to the 2:55 mark.
Start again at the 3:32 mark and go to the 3:37 mark after she says "super happy hearing that"
Start again at the 4:06 mark and go to the 4:24 mark.
Start again the the 4:43 mark and go to the 4:50 mark. (Ignore what she is saying here. Please place these captions:
Discover CoolSculpting Elite
only at the best medspa
schedule a consultation today
for all of the other clips in this video, use the captions of what she is saying.
Please let me know if you have any questions. This is three separate videos just to be clear. Thank you Elsa!
video #1,
please change to "it targets"
video #2
-delete "bulges"
- change "non-invasively" to "non-invasive"
-at the end, say "discover the benefits of CoolSculpting Elite"
video #3
I have these trouble areas and I didn't want anything that was invasive.
they study your body
I also don't want to lose
These are high priority. Thank you!
Video #1: https://watch.screencastify.com/v/8YT1chcGKZNAp05Qux8H
Video #2: https://watch.screencastify.com/v/NcPhwiWGhPMxPxoSgbXN
Here are the correct captions for video #2. Edits are in red.
I've always wanted to try it, and I thought, "Why not?" because I have these trouble areas, and I didn't want anything that was invasive. (can you mute the "so" she says right after invasive and just start her voice again when she says the next line below?)
I am a gym addict, so the fact that the next day I can still go to the gym and go to work was a #1 reason for me.
It's kind of like an art that goes into it because they study your body and different sizes, where they should go.
As much as I want to get the fat removed, I also don't want to remove my body shape. (You'll see in my video note to get rid of the section after this and start again below).
I was scared
ofabout the pain. I thought it was gonna hurt so much...(everything after this is good grammar-wise until this next line below)Look at the pictures from before you
had thegot any treatment (remove this comma) and then today.andSo this will be before you had any CoolSculpting and then after two rounds.There's actually a shape.
Video #3: https://watch.screencastify.com/v/RB0SAHgaQBcGqvOvmIH
https://watch.screencastify.com/v/5rWVrip6p3QWFpagg4o3
If you can get this video that I'm talking about in these notes to me asap that would be great. Thanks!
Hello,
Notes: https://watch.screencastify.com/v/tYGbcLPFbLm9Z4Eg38WZ
Here is the caption I ask you to add to Video #2 in my video notes:
"advanced FDA-cleared fat-freezing technology"
regarding the video#3 from the previous revision I cannot access the screencastify link so I assumed all of the revisions are already included in the "correct captions for video #3*. Edits are in red." that you have noted, please kindly let me know if there's more that needs changing, thank you so much!
See notes here: https://watch.screencastify.com/v/FQmaDn9jjoZTvDfZzAXg
I am also writing them here to be clear:
We want the video to start at the 17 second mark where the person is using the card to draw lines on her stomach, but instead of the current captions that are there about it being an art, we want the very first captions from the beginning of the video:
"I've always wanted to try it, and I thought, "Why not?" because I have these trouble areas, and I didn't want anything that was invasive."
Then you can continue the video on as is. This will cut out the parts where she is talking about art and the gym. Please let me know if you have any questions about this. I explain it in the video so you can see what I mean.
At the end, don't linger on the after photo of her body. Let it stop sliding and then immediately cut to the beach. Cut out the part where she is laying out her towel and just start with her already laying in the sun.
Thank you!
Also,
and then make a duplicate of these videos with just CoolSculpting (without mentioning Elite) like Ivonne mentioned in her note above. Thank you!
For the ones that have CoolSculpting, can you change the end slide to say CoolSculpting as well? They currently still say CoolSculpting Elite.
Can you also start on another CoolSculpting Elite video using clips from this video:
Start at the 1:48 mark and go to 2:03 mark (mute her voice. we will place captions here)
Start again at 2:11 mark and go to the 2:30 mark. (We will be placing captions, but when she starts talking at the 2:27 mark in the blue robe, use the captions of what she is saying. Mute her voice during the rest of the clip.)
Start again at the 3:36 mark and go to the 3:43 mark (use the captions of what she is saying, ending with the word "abdomen")
Start again at the 3:53 mark and go to the 3:55 mark. (mute her voice in this section)
Start again at the 5:03 mark and go to the 5:07 mark. (mute her voice)
Start again at the 5:17 mark and go to the 5:21 mark. (mute her voice)
Start again at the 6:36 mark and go to the 6:42 mark. (mute her voice)
Please shorten the clips anywhere you see that they can be shortened. I trust your judgment with that.
Please use these captions:
Freeze away stubborn fat with CoolSculpting Elite
the world's #1 non-surgical fat reduction treatment
say goodbye to stubborn fat bulges
that won't go away with diet & exercise
frozen fat cells are removed for good
non-invasive
with little to no downtime
long-lasting, natural-looking results
only at the best medspa
discover the benefits CoolSculpting Elite
Schedule a Consultation
First note, you missed this caption: frozen fat cells are removed for good
Please place it at the 10-second mark after the caption:
say goodbye to stubborn fat bulges
that won't go away with diet & exercise
At the 28-second mark where she is filming herself, please correct the captions:
Change planches to flanks
At the end, when you are scrolling through the before and afters, can you let the final after image finish scrolling and be still on the screen for a moment before you cut to her walking?
Thank you!
and here is the 1080x1920 version
Discover the Benefits of CoolSculpting Elite
The girl gets cut off before she says, "what's coming next" so we may need to extend that clip a little.
I feel like we need a caption in this part:
This caption below doesn't quite stay on the screen long enough to read at a normal speed:
I don't see any grammatical errors
Here are the revisions. Thank you for the notes
Thank you!