Good day, Ivonne Brittany . Here is the botox video let me know if there is something I should add more, the video seems too simple.

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Ivonne  What do you think? I was thinking the facility shot should be first and not cut off until the wall shows ZO Skin Center on the wall, but I'll let you take a look. 

Elsa Brittany I always like to start with a human face. 
The video looks good. Just change to "rejuvenate the appearance" we can't say "your" anymore. 

But for the facility shot, do wait until the walls shows ZO Skin Center on the wall. 

Also some of the captions need to be separated from one another. Elsa, when I place a space between caption lines, please make sure they are separated (for example, prevent new lines of forming should be by itself)

Botox is the #1 cosmetic treatment in the world

 

rejuvenate your appearance

 
minimizes fine lines + wrinkles

reverse signs of aging

 

prevent new lines from forming

 

Botox is a quick, non-surgical treatment

results last 4 to 6 months

 

only performed by top injectors 

Yes thank you, I'll work on the changes now.

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Ivonne Brittany  Here are the changes.

please let me know if there's more to add.

Elsa here, please switch so “Botox… comes before “results”. The botox line should be above the other line.

Also please slide in the “reverse” line a second after the previous line completes appearing first.

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Ivonne  Here is the revision

Elsa  looks great! Please make in the other size. thank you

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Ivonne Here is the 1080x1920 version.

Wait I just realized that it doesn't have the offer Elsa and Brittany  

It should be:

Botox
$9/UNIT 

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Hello, Ivonne Brittany . Here are the revisions.

Elsa  please write the " Botox is the #1 cosmetic treatment in the world" after the $9/Unit part.

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ZO Skin Botox 1080x1920.mp4 37.8 MB • Download

Ivonne  Here's the revision

Elsa can you please place 
Botox
New Client Special
$9/UNIT
at the beginning and it has to stay for longer.

Then 
the "botox" for the #1 cosmetic treatment in the world can be smaller.

Also, typo fix "minimize" without an s.

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ZO Skin Botox 1080x1920.mp4 37.8 MB • Download

Ivonne Here's the revision

Elsa , it doesn't look right, let's do it like this:

(write this at the top)
Botox 
$9/UNIT 

(keep it there, and then have the "It is the #1 cosmetic treatment in the world" slide in at the bottom.") 

Then both of them should go away for the "rejuvenate the appearance"

ZO Skin Botox 1080x1920.mp4 37.8 MB • Download

ZO Skin Botox 1080x1080.mp4 36.7 MB • Download

Ivonne Here is the revision

Elsa you forgot the "It" before "is the #1..."

ZO Skin Botox 1080x1080.mp4 36.7 MB • Download

ZO Skin Botox 1080x1920.mp4 37.8 MB • Download

Ivonne Im sorry

Thank you Elsa !