Medstar Creative Team

Dermal Filler Videos

Assigned to
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa
Notes
Hi Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa Can you please create two dermal filler videos using the directions below?

Video #1:

Please start with this video: Start at the 34-second mark just as Ivonne looks up at the doctor and then back and smiles and go until the 50-second mark.

Then cut to this video:

and start at the 7-second mark and go to the 23-second mark. 

Start again at the 35-second mark and go to the 37-second mark. 

Start again at the 52-second mark and go to the 1:01 mark. 

Start again at the 1:17 second mark and go to the 1:26 mark. 

Start again at the 1:32 mark and go to the 1:39 mark. 

Start again at the 2:02 mark and go to the 2:06 mark. Ending the video before she stops smiling. 

Please use these captions:

Reduce fine lines + wrinkles
with Dermal Fillers

enhance facial features

renew youthful contours

restore lost volume

achieve symmetry

plump lips (I want this caption to be on the section where he is touching her lip with the Q tip if we can time it right).

enhance appearance without surgery 

minimal downtime

only at the best medspa
schedule a consultation


Video #2: Can you please find this video you've made in the past and make the following edits?




Cut out the part between the 12-second mark and the 20-second mark? Starting again when she raises her eyebrows.

And add these captions:

Reduce Signs of Aging
with Dermal Fillers

enhance facial features

renew youthful contours

plump the lips (I want this caption to be on the section where he is touching her lip with the Q tip if we can time it right).

fill in lines and wrinkles

restore lost volume

no downtime required

FDA-approved treatments

rejuvenate & restore dermal fillers

only at the best medspa
schedule a consultation

Comments & Events

Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar
Wow Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa These are fantastic. I only have a few notes!

For the first one, can you extend the end just a little? I don't like that it ends with the doctor's hand coming in and blocking her face a little. Let's just extend it by a second or two and see how it looks.

For the second one, after "plump lips" can you add "achieve symmetry" when he is framing her face with his hands and then pulling his hands back? It's at the 22-second mark.

Also, this is my fault, but can you add the word "with" to the caption at the 30-second mark? It should say rejuvenate and restore with dermal fillers.

If there is a way to speed up the beginning of the 2nd video without making it look weird, please do that just a tad. 

Thank you!
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa can you please make some priority edits for me. If you can get this done asap it would be great. https://watch.screencastify.com/v/8RyGEeK6KrZfSbAzIe6g

thank you!

Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Brittany  please delete the comment with the videos that you gave in Shane's task. see my video to Elsa to know why. thanks!
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa Great job with Ivonne's notes!

Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar Ivonne  Based on your notes, these look good now. I am replacing them in my comment on the campaign task. 
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa the shots used look good but now captions need to change order. Please see notes: https://watch.screencastify.com/v/uRVQV1aeoa9zWDziqNEs

-fill in lines + wrinkles (instead of enhance facial features)

- enhance facial features (instead of renew youthful contours)

- plump the lips (keeping it)

-soften smile lines

-achieve symmetry (keeping it)

-renew youthful contours (when in the chin area, instead of fill in lines + wrinkles restore volume)

- DELETE FDA part

-restore lost volume (instead of rejuvenate + restore with dermal fillers)
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar
thank you so much for the notes
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar Ivonne  I took a look at your video and notes and these look good to me, but I will let you confirm and then I will add them to the ad task. Thank you!
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar thank u so much@
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa looks good but you forgot:

"soften smile lines" when I smile. Please see notes above. 

Thnak you!
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Brittany  please drop this where it belongs and save it to basecamp. thank you! 
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