Medstar Creative Team

Ivonne Semaglutide Video 1

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Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa
Notes
Hi Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa can you please edit my video below to two different versions:

* on the video please zoom in a little on the apple when I hold the apple in front of the camera. 

FIRST VERSION

1. Keep my voice there and just add a background music.
2. Please add these captions to go along with what I'm saying:

Semaglutide for Weightloss Management

the benefits

lose dress sizes

decreases appetite + increases feelings of fullness

improves metabolism and makes you feel good

wear whatever you want

losing weight has never been this easy

feel more confident (make this into a bigger font with a bouncing effect like we have done in a previous IV Therapy video)

book a consultation and discover if this is the right solution for you

SECOND VERSION
1. Replace voice with the "Feeling good (blue)" song, choose a part that doesn't include cursing
2. Please add these captions

Semaglutide for Weightloss Management

a promising solution for anyone struggling with weight loss

these are the benefits:

lose dress sizes

it decreases appetite + increases feelings of fullness

improves metabolism and makes you feel good

wear whatever you want

losing weight has never been this easy

feel more confident (make this into a bigger font with a bouncing effect like we have done in a previous IV Therapy video)

book a consultation and discover if this is the right solution for you

THEN MAKE ANOTHER SET WITH THIS LOGO:



Here is the video:

Comments & Events

Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar
Thank you so much for these notes! I'll send the revision asap
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa please see notes: https://watch.screencastify.com/v/VAzePT0qiDbwLjwA0nNg

apply these notes to both videos.

Also at the end can we do something different for the "book your consultation part" so it stands out more? Maybe a little bigger like the "confidence" part?

Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Brittany can you check for spelling errors? any suggestions?
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar Ivonne oh my gosh. You are so cute! I love this one. 

You caught the only grammatical issue in your video to Elsa. My only suggestions are that at the 0:06 mark, do we want the shot of you setting up the camera? 

And at the end, with the white couch, the white dress, and the white font, it's hard to read the captions on the screen. 
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar lol thank u!
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar I adjusted comm
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa these look great! Can you just increase the text of "if this is the right solution for you" a little bit and place more shadow in it so it stands out a little more?

Please make in other sizes and please make another round without the DCCM logo.
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa  

also please change the following in the first video (the one without my voice):

"lose dress sizes" to:

lose inches, drop dress sizes (change this one in both videos)


change: 
decreases appetite and increases feelings of fullness" to

decreases appetite and makes you feel fuller, longer

change:

"improves metabolism" 

to 

"enhances metabolism"

change:
"and makes you feel good" 

to 

"boosts fat burning"
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa  they looks great! Can you make the 1080x1080 size with free music. In these, please make "boosts fat burning" come on a little bit sooner. 
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa these look great. Please send me the 1080x1080 versions of the other style with the music. thank u!
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa  no, I meant this video with background music instead of my voice speaking (but free music). 
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Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa Can you please drop both sizes of this video without the logo, but change the first caption to:

"Weight Loss Shot"
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa  the second doesn't have sound. 
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Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa  The 1080x1080 version you dropped above doesn't have the voice over. Can you drop a version with the voice over and also drop a version of the 1080X1920 with just the music?
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Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa  For the 1080x1920 video you dropped most recently, can you change "Semaglutide for Weight Loss Management" to "Weight Loss Shot"?
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