Medstar Creative Team

Mega 3 facials video

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Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa
Notes
Hi Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa can you please help me create 1 video for 3 different facials? Here are my video notes:
https://watch.screencastify.com/v/bvW2aTudGOy3thnVwVoB

Structure of the video:

-First clip you already made of Hydrafacial of girl saying "this is why my skin feels amazing" in big letters.
-then just the background of this girl but instead of the big "hydrafacial" logo we'll have:

   GET
$50 OFF

Hydrafacial
Chemical Peel
Oxygen facial

-then the end of the hydrafacial video you already created when girl is talking with those same captions.
-then the hydrafacial video you already created with the captions I give you and music background
-then the Chemical Peel girl talking with what she's saying in captions
-chemical peel being shown with these captions:

A chemical peel resurfaces your skin.

Leaving you with a newer, brighter complexion

Improve texture and appearance

Reveal healthier, smoother skin.

Rediscover youthful beauty

-then the Oxygen Facial end of the video where girl is saying how great it was (only use the section I pointed out in the video notes I provided). create captions of what she's saying
-then the Oxygen Facial treatment being done, with these captions:

Give your skin a healthy boost of oxygen. 

Hydrate and support natural collagen

Visibly smooth lines + wrinkles. 

Get a brighter, clearer complexion.

Achieve a more youthful look.

End with a clip of one of the facials being performed in the background with an overlay and big font saying the below with no zoom effect like in the beginning:

   GET
$50 OFF

Hydrafacial
Chemical Peel
Oxygen facial

Book Now

Let's use the same font style you used in the different parts of the hydrafacial video throughout the other ones in their different sections so it looks cohesive. Please only do one size for now so I can give feedback and edits. Thank you!


Comments & Events

Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar
Thank you, I will send you the updates.
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar Ivonne  Thank you so much for the notes, I'll send the revisions as soon as I finished them.
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa please delete when first girl says "this is the after, as you can tell" and start with her saying "my face is a...."

delete last girl saying "it is glowing my whole skin, my whole body." start with her saying "I love my skin"

On the end slide, place Book Now below the list of the three treatments, so that it's not separate. Also, take out the very last scene of the girl with the fan, so video ends earlier. 

thank you!
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Hi Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa , please see edits:
1. Please delete this section of her speaking (because video has to be less than a min



2. Please list facials in how they appear with hydrafacial first. Also it is Oxygen Facial please change because in its clip you wrote Oxygen Peel.

Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa also please change lines in Oxygen Facial to say:

Hydrates + supports natural collagen.

Visibly smooths lines + wrinkles.

Also this clip can go by a little faster:
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar
Yes thank you Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar Ivonne  
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar
Good day!  Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar Ivonne , I manage to cut it down to 58 seconds without removing the "Achieve a more youthful look." by cutting some of unnecessary and empty clips and speeding up some of the effects of the captions, I hope this changes is fine with you.
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa  this is perfect! Thank you! Please make in other size. 
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa  can you please bring the captions a little bit lower? 
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar
Sure
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa  this height is perfect. Please keep this note for the future! Thank you!
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Ivonne Ackerman completed this to-do.
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar Ivonne Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa  Shinier is spelled incorrectly in this video when the first girl says her skin is luminous and shinier (its says shiner)
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar oh wow
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Brittany thank you for catching that!

Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa can you please fix? 

Thank you!