Medstar Creative Team

Tempsure Skin Tightening Video

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Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa
Notes
Hi Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa Can you please create a video with the following clips and captions?

Clips from Video #1:

Add clip from 0:04 - 0:05 - just when Ivonne moves toward the camera and does a little shoulder shake.

Start again a 0:14 - 0:16, stopping before she looks down at the camera.

Start again at 0:38 - 0:43

Start again at 1:04 - 1:13

Start again at 1:16 - 1:24

Start again at 1:30 - 1:34

Clips from Video #2:

Start at 0:12 - 0:16

Start again at 0:18 - 0:20

Start again at 0:55 - 0:56 (Everything will be in order, except I want this clip to go at the very end of all of the clips, including the one from the 3rd video below.)

Clip from Video #3:


Start at 0:31 - 0:34  

Captions:


in the time it takes to put on makeup

get an instant facelift

with Tempsure Envi

a next-level addition to any skincare routine

tighten skin

reduce wrinkles

say goodbye to undereye bags

look and feel younger than ever

☑️no surgery
☑️no downtime
☑️virtually painless

only at the best medical spa

discover Tempsure Envi today


Please let me know if you have any questions. Thank you!

Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar Ivonne  

Comments & Events

Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
  Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Brittany great job with this!

Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa   can you please use one of the below songs. The one you think would work best. Please create short clips and make it user generated with the types of fonts we’ve been using so it looks like we created it on tik tok.

Bizcochito by Rosalia
Made you look by meghan trainor
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Thank you!
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa Thank you so much. Just a few notes on the captions. I think you copied and pasted parts of them twice.

the third caption says "get anwith Tempsure Envi" but should just say "with Tempsure Envi"

the "tighten skin" caption has an "a" before it that needs to be removed please

for the checkmarks - no surgery, no downtime, virtually painless, can you make them appear on the screen one at a time? Like one appears, then another, but the first doesn't disappear. I would like all three of them on the screen before they disappear. Does that make sense?

Can you also remove the audio of Ivonne speaking at the end of the video?

Please cut out the part where she is struggling to open the bottle at the 0:19 second mark and resume at the mark I mention here from the 3rd video?

https://watch.screencastify.com/v/s4imTDldxIxGYVjeQ7hP

Please let me know if you have any questions. Thank you!
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Brittany  are there any clips where I’m only making faces or looking in the mirror instead of so many with me applying makeup? 
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Brittany  can you please give me an access to the link of your screencastify
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa can you please make all of these clips faster?  Can you please change the range to speed it up. Please use the meghan trainor song since I think it goes better.

Also can you change the get an instant facelift clip so that it is the first seconds of the this video below:



Please change the "with tempsure envi" clip to the clip below at this time approx: :49-:52 and the "a next level addition to any skincare routine" to approx 1:30 - 1:35

tighten skin, reduce wrinkles
:37 - 48


say goodbye to underbags and look and feel younger than ever to the below:
:17- :28
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa please see notes: https://watch.screencastify.com/v/L90XVYIleZF0m3vBrd0a. instead of changing the range can you just cut the clips in the ideal moment to make them short? I gave you an approximation of the times of the clips but please use your judgment and choose only 3-5 seconds or so of the best part so that it's choppier.
Can you sync it to the beat?

Can you change the beginning clip to this one below from :22-:25


Can you exchange the end clip for this one below from :29- the end?
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa thank you so much!

Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Brittany  can you please check spelling?
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar Ivonne  spelling is good. Do you think she should move the captions to the top of the screen in the 1080x1080 version between 0:08 and 0:12, especially at 0:12 when it talks about undereye bags? They cover up your face and I think they might look better in the top right corner. Just a thought. 
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar good idea
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar thanks!
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa  for the 1080x1080 version can you please make the captions smaller? Also, can you please move the captions between :08 and :12 to the upper right corner?
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar
Yes, sure.
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
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Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa We need a Spanish version of this video. Can you make a version with these captions?

en el tiempo que tardas en maquillarte, obtén un lifting facial instantáneo

con Tempsure Envi

una adición de nivel superior a cualquier rutina de cuidado de la piel

Levanta y tensa la piel

Minimiza las arrugas alrededor de los ojos, la frente y la boca

Mejora la apariencia de las bolsas debajo de los ojos

No invasivo (the green checkmark)

sin tiempo de recuperación (the green checkmark)

sin dolor (green checkmark)

solo en el mejor spa médico

descúbre Temspure Envi hoy
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar
sure I'll send the video asap
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa  sorry! Can you please start the first captions as soon as the first video cut comes in so we can spread them out a little, since the beginning prt goes too fast?
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar
Yes of course
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar
Elsa, Video Editor at Medstar Elsa Is there any way to leave this caption on the screen longer?

Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar
Hannah, Client Success Manager at Medstar Hannah  Take a look at both versions above. Do you think it looks better slowed down with the caption on longer or the version above that that is normal speed?
Hannah, Client Success Manager at Medstar
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Brittany  that's hard - I read the bottom one easier with the captions on longer but I like the other video at normal speed (Im also probably reading slower because its Spanish)
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar
Hannah, Client Success Manager at Medstar Hannah  I agree. I think the slowed down video is distracting. 
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar good call!
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar
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