✔ June article
Completed by Alyssa W.
- Assigned to
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Kamie A.
- Notes
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can you please take a look at how the doctor edited this page, so you can take his notes into account for future articles:
Kamie
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wQtOrnoIKliwdIJkBtIuhLQfS-UMU0r_YbuHNVYHLU0/edit?usp=sharing
he said: " i edited the article to make it more factual and how I want it to read. "
It's ready!
this doc is for Lower EYELID LIFT (Eye Bags)
The yellow is what I originally had.
The blue is what he changed it to.
The red is content he deleted completely.
Mostly, he wanted to stress that virtually anyone can have a penile implant no matter their age. He took out almost all mentions I had of how age can sometimes be a stipulation. Aside from that, very minimal changes.