Alyssa  letting you know I've seen this! I will start this today!

Hey Team! Alyssa Ivonne  
Just wanted to give you an update on this. I finished the homepage blurbs and am now working through each of the service page hero image blurbs. There are so many haha, but I will hopefully have it done and to you by tomorrow morning.

Ivonne Alyssa
here is the completed doc! The service page hero image blurbs are all listed at the end.
I have some options for the first 2 blurb headings on the homepage.
Please let me know if I missed anything!

I tried my best not to repeat words and phrases- it got a bit difficult at the end with the individual service pages though😅

Blurbs.Azul Medspa.KL.docx 310 KB • Download

Dijah  thank you so much! These are perfect!! 

Brittany  will you please go through these and make sure all have been updated on the webiste? Double check the confirmation for homepage has been updated too. Thanks for your help!

Alyssa  I updated all of these, but I don't see a confirmation page. 

Thanks Brittany ! I am having the developers check that they are added.

Thank you Brittany ! They needed to be  placed on mobile but developer did it. I tagged u in the task.

Hi Dijah Brittany we found a few grammatical errors in some of the blurbs. This is something we try to catch in the auditing process, but we missed these. I just want to make sure everyone is aware, to be extra alert when writing / editing / updating these since they are the first thing people see on the landing page. The more eyes aware, the better! 

I am making the edits now. Thanks team!

This message is from hector -

I have found a few issues here and there. But this one is a bit blatant.

That's two grammatical errors on the same page.
https://azul-medspa.com/acne-laser-genesis/

Also this page - https://azul-medspa.com/laser-vein-removal/
The blurb on this page makes no grammatical sense.

Reduce spider veins & facial redness in safe, comfortable, treatments using innovative laser technology

Does it mean to say "in a safe, comfortable..... what?" environment? 

Or 

Reduce spider veins & facial redness. Safe, comfortable treatments using innovative laser technology.