Kamie  I pushed the due date back a little again. I know this was a big order. When do you think the rest will be delivered?

Brittany  I should have them all done over the weekend, so no later than monday. I apologize all of the content and ad copy orders hit me at once so I'm still playing catch up

Kamie  is this ready? 

Kamie  Sorry to follow up so close behind Alyssa, but can you get me an ETA on these last 3 pages?

Brittany Alyssa I'm finishing everything off tonight, so tomorrow. 

The Neck lift page was given to a new writer so I will follow up and see where they are with it. Thank you guys for checking in and being patient with this!

Kamie  Hey! I hate to be a pest but you said these would be done by yesterday so just checking in. Only 2 more to go! So close to the monstrously long finish line. lol

Brittany  I SWEAR I will have this finished ASAP. I keep having other high-priority things come up. I will send you guys the final 2 pages ASAP

Nicol https://docs.google.com/document/d/1reCdU_jBh2xwD_i9XuqcfXQXxmW0VbtbQPLeYAaY5l4/edit?usp=sharing

Hey team I am so sorry for the delay on this project. Reconstructive surgery is like a black hole. There are literally millions of surgeries that fall under this very wide umbrella. I have used the notes and provided info but I want to make sure I am including the correct info and surgeries, so I want Nicol to take a look at this just to make sure. Thanks!

Kamie I tagged you in the document. The benefits are missing under the Benefits H1

Nicol  Other than my note above, this is edited. Please take a look and let Kamie know if you have any feedback based on your knowledge of the client. 

Kamie Brittany - 
Thank you! I appreciate this was a monster!

I have one question and a note

What's the general consensus on including a Doc's name in the meta description? Because he has trauma experience and worked in Brooklyn with the experience to correct many different phenotypes (ethnic looks) without bias, he wants to make a name for himself and, says many people find his practice through his name.

For the note - the use of the word "defect" right up front can be a bit jarring b/c it has a very negative connotation, despite it being a very medical term. I googled around for alternatives to express the same idea.  Can you use terms that are later on in the article like "restore" or something like "corrects or changes parts of the body to function better, and be more comfortable for you"?  The issue of a birth defect cannot be denied, but it's perhaps a bit too strong for the first paragraph. Just my opinion!

Nicol noted! I took it out and used a different work around the term. I have it included in a section further down to describe what reconstructive surgery can fix. Let me know what you think of it!

As far as adding his name to the meta description, I think maybe it would be better in the title possibly? I'll talk to Mike to see what he thinks about this specific situation! Thank you!

Kamie  are you available for a quick Zoom call for this page? 

Nicol  I am, I emailed you back

Kamie  I saw your comment on the document. Is this good to go now?

Brittany  Nicol is checking with the doc about some of the surgeries listed on the page but you can go ahead and edit this. It's finished from my end just waiting to make sure everything that's include is good to go. Thanks!

Kamie Thanks for letting me know. I won't edit this until we have confirmation from the doctor and Nicol so I don't have to edit it twice

Brittany  doc replied, he doesn't do those so I just completely removed that section. This is good to go for editing now, thanks!