Hey Kamie if you could take this over. We are re-writing this website/bio for this doctor. It's not so much SEO-focused as it is just making it sound better and more professional. Here are the sections we need to rewrite

doczara.beautysculpt.net


here is a video explaining more:

https://watch.screencastify.com/v/TgciYbPPpB0HGFvfwYsL

here is a reference to her bio:
https://crmcaesthetics.com/about-our-center/our-staff/

Follow up you saw this Kamie  , high priority. thank you so much

whitney.zelig@gmail.com I'm attaching what I came up with. I shortened the credentials

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list to only the most important and professional sounding. I also rewrote the bio content to make it sound more professional. Please let me know what you think or if you would like me to change anything!

I think it is great Kamie

whitney.zelig@gmail.com  I will have Selena get this up on the page. If you have any suggestions for adding speak to it and I can update them or ask Selena. 

Alyssa please get over to Selena ASAP

thx Kamie  you're amazing

Kamie Melissa  

doctor is upset she thinks this was copy and pasted 

can we re-write this whole thing

as soon as possible too Melissa Kamie she wants to see the copy .

We need to make sure its less than 15% plagirsim 

here is a few places you can find out more about her 

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whitney.zelig@gmail.com I completely re-wrote it but tried to keep some of the main talking points. Please look it over and let me know what you think.

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Client still not happy Kamie  

please help me Melissa  

nevermind i had to refund

whitney.zelig@gmail.com I’m sorry, I felt like I was stabbing in the dark a bit. I used some references from other client bios mixed with the articles on her website. Melissa  is probably better suited for this.

Kamie  not your fault . Client is extremely difficult and hard to work with 

Kamie -- This had nothing to do with you. You're writing is great and we so appreciate you making yourself available while on vacation to make those changes.