✔ Update CoolSculpting Page
Completed by Alyssa W.
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Brittany R.
- Notes
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Hi
Kamie
I am working on the updates to this CoolSculpting page, but I wanted to ask a few questions.
Ivonne
The current score of the live URL is an 11.3 Grade Level. That is similar to the score that resulted from my updates. Should I go through all of the content to try to dumb it down a bit to a lower level?
Second, The original page was over 1,000 words. It is now around 1200 words. I wasn't sure if there was an ideal number. I know we do 500-word updates usually but wasn't sure if 1500 words was too much. Here is what I have so far. Please let me know the answers to these questions, and I will finish up this project.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12jjwuRQhOdRYrWM2N89VhZyeeONQPf731rAk3S4FTrQ/edit?usp=sharing
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12jjwuRQhOdRYrWM2N89VhZyeeONQPf731rAk3S4FTrQ/edit?usp=sharing