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Update CoolSculpting Page

Assigned to
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Brittany R.
Notes
Hi Kamie Allen, Content Manager Kamie Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar Ivonne I am working on the updates to this CoolSculpting page, but I wanted to ask a few questions.

The current score of the live URL is an 11.3 Grade Level. That is similar to the score that resulted from my updates. Should I go through all of the content to try to dumb it down a bit to a lower level?

Second, The original page was over 1,000 words. It is now around 1200 words. I wasn't sure if there was an ideal number. I know we do 500-word updates usually but wasn't sure if 1500 words was too much. Here is what I have so far. Please let me know the answers to these questions, and I will finish up this project.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12jjwuRQhOdRYrWM2N89VhZyeeONQPf731rAk3S4FTrQ/edit?usp=sharing

Comments & Events

Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Brittany great start! Can you go through it and dumb it down? Also, the H1 should be CoolSculpting Baltimore. Ideally it should be 1,500 words. 
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Got it!
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Brittany great work! It just needs re-organizing, but I'll let Kamie Allen, Content Manager Kamie  do that (in suggesting mode so Brittany can see the difference). Also, Kamie do you have those new sample pieces of treatment pages? 
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Thank you!
Kamie Allen, Content Manager
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Brittany looks good, I just reorganized it a bit!

Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar Ivonne  I have all of the pages I sent you in an email the other day, would those work? They all follow the layout guidelines we are using now. Just let me know!
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar
Kamie Allen, Content Manager Kamie Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar Ivonne  I am noticing this new page never got updated on the site. I want to double-check with Kamie that it's good to go so I can get a developer to update it. 
Ivonne Ackerman, Medstar Thank u!!
Kamie Allen, Content Manager
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Brittany  oh snap, yeah please task to a developer!
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Tasked out!
Alyssa Workman, Medstar
Alyssa Workman completed this to-do.