Ear, Nose & Throat Center LLP - www.stamfordentcenter.com

This is for a client who already has a website we can use that we just need to optimize.

Write Pediatric ENT content

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Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar Hector M.
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Hello Melissa Zelig, Medstar Melissa  
This client does not have a Pediatric ENT page and we need one. 
Can you please create unique copy for this page?
Thanks Melissa.

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Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar
Melissa Zelig, Medstar Melissa  
Good morning. 
Can I please get an update on this task- content?
We want to show this site to the client this week hopefully. 
Thanks. 


PS... If you haven't started yet, then let me know and I will write it myself to move this fwd. 
Melissa Zelig, Medstar
Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar Hector  I havent started writing about it yet
Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar
Wow, really? 
You are backed up with a lot of work I bet. 
Well, we need this since Chris wants to send to client right away. 
If you can't get to it by today then I will have to do it... 
Then you can edit it?
Melissa Zelig, Medstar
I can work on it today while I am traveling, if you havent already started on the content. 

Any ideas on how to better manage client expectations for content. I need at least two weeks to finish an assignment and the biggest bottle neck is caused by the blogs at the end of the month. I wish it wasn't so hard to find good writers.
Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar
Melissa Zelig, Medstar Melissa  
good morning. 
No I haven't started on it since maintaining the marketing campaigns is taking so much of my time. 
You can go ahead and take care of it then. Just don't write and drive!! :)
You are correct about managing client expectations. You know, they want what they want, when they want it. 
However, they also have to realize that we are only humans. 
I will log into my Freelancer account and see if I can set up a post to get us some writers... 

Thanks.  
Melissa Zelig, Medstar
thanks hector
Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar
You're welcome Melissa Zelig, Medstar Melissa .. 
Update... So I changed my Freelancer account to HIRE.. and I posted a job looking for writers. Already have a few people who are going to be providing us samples... Will let you know once I receive them... 
Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar
I am going to proofread this for you now.. 
So I am using my own Freelancer account.. But I never hired anyone there since I used to use it to get work. 
There are many good writers, but they are bucking at sending free samples... 
(I was reluctant to do so at Upwork too since people use this as a trick to get freebies)
In any case, we can perhaps hire one.. get ratings... positive feedback.. and then get more people that way.. 
Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar
1st sample -
Simran Singh

 I made a few edits -

Coolsculpting has become the #1 non-invasive treatment for millions of men and women around the world. They are using the FDA approved non-surgical, Coolsculpting procedure to get rid of stubborn fat. Coolsculpting treatments generally take around 35 minutes and the results are long lasting. It offers natural lasting results and targets areas such as belly fat, thigh fat, love handle bulges and fat around the arms. 

This procedure can help you get rid of stubborn fat that diet or exercise may not be able to target. No wonder so many people in the United States and around the world have chosen Coolsculpting over other invasive & more expensive procedures such as liposuction. 
Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar
Another writer - Attiya Z. @IdealAftab  - 
did not provide sample -- but sent me this work she has done - 


                        A metabolic disorder is due to the disturbance in chemical reactions in the human body which lead the increase in heart disease, type 2 diabetes, kidney failure, and stroke by increasing blood pressure, blood sugar level, cholesterol level, triglyceride levels and body fats. In diagnose and treatment of a metabolic disorder, the general physician checks the symptoms and then refer the patients to specialists. The treatment is totally depending on the patient. By changing eating habits, leaving smoking, losing weight, sleeping patterns and physical exercises, the condition of patients can be improved. The management of symptoms can help in reducing many complications of health through device. In this project, an intelligent device will be designed to support metabolic disorder patients. This device will monitor the condition of patients through five risk factors by measuring blood pressure, blood sugar level, cholesterol level, body weight and triglyceride levels. The value of bodyweight of patient will help to estimate the BMI value. The patients will add the values of the five risk factors. The device will have the data of safe limits of five risk factors. It will compare the data of patient and then show that either he has metabolic disorder or not. Along with it, it will analyze the specific type of metabolic disorder of patient. 

2. Statement of the Problem: (600)

2.1. General Background of Problem

                        In all of the world, the number of people having metabolic disorder is increasing day by day. Only in the U.S.A, mainly 23% of adults are having metabolic disorder. Many people are having this disorder, but they are not aware of the symptoms. The metabolic disorder can cause major health issues. 

2.2. Importance of the Study

                        The 21st century is the age of science and technology., where the researchers are working to design effective systems for the support of human beings. Unlike the past, there are many people who are facing metabolic disorders and they are not able to monitor their risk factors effectively. Our smart device through the use of biosensors, activators, software algorithm and technological system, the patients will manage the metabolic disorder. It will also help them to monitor five major risk factors and then compare the inserted values with the base values. This smart device will be human-friendly, efficient and safe to use for the patients of all ages. They will able to analyze their situation and then interact with healthcare provider who will suggest them related medication and treatment. This study is very important to design a setup which will support the better management of healthcare for metabolic disorder patients. 
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I have the full 4 page document. 
Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar
Writer name -
Name: Arwa 

Work ID. 1975

Millions of women and men freeze fat bulges and change their bodies with Coolsculpting. No wonder it is the world's # 1 non-invasive therapy for fat reduction! To safely eliminate belly fat, love handles, double chins, and other tenacious fat deposits, the groundbreaking technique utilizes advanced cooling technology. Coolsculpting is cleared by the FDA and it is clinically proven to be safe and reliable. It also produces long-lasting, natural-looking results. It takes as little as 35 minutes with virtually no downtime or pain.

 

Regards,

Arwa 
Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar
Here is another example from = Swathi Reddy K.
Just like many women decide to augment their breasts, some women choose to reduce their breast size. This is normally done when the woman has overly large breasts, which can cause severe health problems. This surgery is one that is commonly performed.
 
Some women have macromastia, which means the breasts are overly enlarged and are causing other serious health issues. The issues that can result from macromastia are the neck, head, back, and shoulder pain, breathing problems, and poor circulation of the blood. Other issues, which are not medical, include the inability to fit into clothes and severe indentations from the bra straps.
 
The same techniques that are used for breast lifts are normally applied during this surgery, especially when getting a breast reduction in LA. However, the main concern when having this surgery done is that the tissue around the nipple stays viable for sensitivity and lactation purposes.
 
Sometimes liposuction will be used during the surgery if some, or most, of the breast tissue is from fat. The surgery is normally done at a hospital or a properly designated surgical center. The patient is given general anesthesia to allow the surgeon to do the work properly and without worry. The surgery itself can take anywhere from 3 to 5 hours and requires many different steps.
 
The surgeon will need to make the required incisions and remove the required amount of tissue and skin from the breast. Also, the surgeon will need to ensure that both breasts are symmetrical and that the nipple placement is correct. It is possible to do the surgery as an outpatient, but the surgery may require an overnight stay at the hospital.

Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar
Benefits of CoolSculpting  - From Amanda N.
Example One:

Are you someone who works out and diets properly, but still has those stubborn areas
that just won’t budge? CoolSculpting is a great, safe, non invasive FDA approved
alternative to liposuction that you might be looking for.
CoolSculpting targets stubborn fat such as, upper/lower belly, love handles,
inner/outer thighs, arms, back fat and can help with a double chin. CoolSculpting is not
only a fast treatment, but also includes zero downtime.

Example Two:

Using the advanced cooling technology, Coolsculpting freezes the fat cells to
death, to completely eliminate them. Not only zero downtime, but painless as well,
delivering a long lasting result. No wonder millions of men and women are turning to
Coolscuplting as an alternative to liposuction.
whitney.zelig@gmail.com, Medstar
Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar Hector  can you make this a seperate email for melissa please? 
Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar
You mean a separate task? 
I thought about that. 
I will move the comments over to another one.. I will add you because I want and need your input as well. 
Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar
Hector Mota completed this to-do.
Melissa Zelig, Medstar
Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar Hector thanks man. What do you think of these writers
Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar
I moved this to another task Melissa so we can continue.
I have one girl there that seems to be good. I will have her write one article for us...
article topics for your writers - CONTENT