Melissa  

Hi Melissa and Whitney, below are the answers to the few questions you had :)

1. Besides the town/city your spa is located in, are there any surrounding areas you would like to rank for? For example, a client located in Southlake (a suburb of Dallas) Texas, would like to rank for Dallas and Fort Worth, as well as Southlake.

Westlake, Rocky River, Avon, Avon Lake, Bay village, akron... 

2. Has your facility received any awards or recognitions? Is there anything you can think of that may distinguish you from your competitors? (i.e. a luxury facility, the experience or training of the treatment provider, etc.)

I will get back to you on this!

3. CoolSculpting Technologies: Do you have the new CoolSculpting applicators? Do you offer dual coolsculpting?

Yes new CS applicators. No for dual sculpting for right now.

4. Do you offer any discount (or promotion) for first time CoolSculpting patients? (Many facilities offer a 25% discount for new CoolSculpting customers.)

We are going to offer 25% off to new CS patients. 

5. Do you have a slogan, tagline, or phrase that you’ve adopted at your facility? Do you have one specifically for CoolSculpting?  (i.e. “fear no mirror” or “sculpt yourself skinny” or “become the best version of yourself,” etc.)

We don’t but I will get back you on this because we should. I will message the girls and send a few slogans we like. And you could help us pick the best one. 

6. I will write an extensive overview of CoolSculpting, focusing on the most searched terms and keywords. But are there any particular details you would like to include or emphasize in your copy?

No, nothing in particular. However, tomorrow when I’m in the office I will ask the girls and let you know. 

whitney.zelig@gmail.com  

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Melissa is this proofread and ready to go? IF so please let Jonnamae  know

whitney.zelig@gmail.com its proof read by me. but that is never enough. have the intern proof read it. Also, send me her info so I can get her started with hubstaff. We'll start her at 30 an article. 60 a service page. when she gets better and I dont have to proof everything we will bump her up. 

Have her proof read this version. I purposefully left two errors in there to see if she catches them. 

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Melissa  okay but we need to start getting more writers beause I need Amy on my team eventually, she's good with people and everything else

also Melissa  I can put her on hubstaff when we get her as an hourly worker- right now it would be per project, correct? 

whitney, unless these people can write for me long term, I cant afford the investment into them. So unless amy can write long term, there is no point in having her write at all

but it's ready to go. So give to whoever

Hello whitney.zelig@gmail.com , 

is this for this site? https://mibella.wpengine.com/ or

for their live site? https://www.mibellacle.com/ if for their live site, I may need Isaac's help.

Jonnamae  wp engine for now

here whitney.zelig@gmail.com  
https://mibella.wpengine.com/coolsculpting-westlake/
https://mibella.wpengine.com/c/coolsculpting-westlake/