✔ content writers- review their CS samples
Completed by Hector M.
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Hector M.
Melissa Z.
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the assignment we gave these eligible content writers:
Thank you for your response. Your work has impressed us. We want to make sure that your style is a good fit for our brand and was wondering if you would draft a 150-ish word paragraph on a topic we commonly write about: CoolSculpting. Below are several examples of the type of blurb we are looking for, but encourage you to be as original as possible while maintaining the tone and information of the example paragraphs. We are looking for a smooth read, with active, easy to understand sentences.
If you enjoy this type of writing and your content matches what we are looking for, we would like to invite you to write one or two 500 word articles. We will pay you $35 per article and supply you with the topic and additional resources. From there, if we work well together, we can negotiate a contract for reoccurring content.
Thank you.
Example 1
CoolSculpting is the world’s most popular non-invasive fat reduction treatment. Using advanced cooling technology, CoolSculpting eliminates fat cells by freezing them to death. This revolutionary body contouring treatment is ideal for reducing stubborn bulges that resist diet and exercise like belly fat, love handles, thigh fat, double chins, and other problem areas. CoolSculpting is FDA cleared and scientifically proven to be safe and effective and treatments are quick, painless and require no downtime. Now that men and women can reduce fat without surgery or downtime, it’s no wonder millions of people are turning to CoolSculpting as a non-surgical alternative to liposuction.
Example 2
Millions of women and men are freezing away stubborn bulges and transforming their bodies with CoolSculpting - the #1 non-invasive fat reduction treatment in the world! The revolutionary procedure uses advanced cooling technology to safely reduce belly fat, love handles, double chins, and other tenacious fat deposits. CoolSculpting is FDA cleared and scientifically proven to be safe and effective, delivering natural looking, long lasting results. Best of all treatments take as little as 35 minutes, are virtually painless and require no downtime. This makes CoolSculpting the ideal, non-surgical alternative to liposuction.
Example 3
Freeze away stubborn bulges with CoolSculpting – the #1 Non-invasive fat reduction procedure in the world! CoolSculpting is the only FDA cleared treatment that uses advanced cooling technology to eliminate notorious fat deposits without surgery or downtime. Most treatments take as little as 35 minutes to perform and CoolSculpting results are clearly visible, natural looking, and long lasting. CoolSculpting effectively targets belly fat, love handles, fat on the thighs and upper arms, double chins, and other problem areas that resist diet and exercise. That is why millions of men and women have turned to CoolSculpting as a non-surgical alternative to liposuction.
Example 4
CoolSculpting is the world’s #1 non-invasive fat reduction treatment that targets stubborn fat deposits such as belly fat, love handles, thigh fat, double chins, upper arm fat and more! Hailed as the non-surgical alternative to Liposuction, the CoolSculpting procedures is fast, painless and requires no downtime. And it’s proven to work, having been performed over 4 million times, validated by numerous scientific studies and cleared by the FDA as safe and effective. CoolSculpting’s results are clearly visible, natural looking and long lasting. If you are a healthy man or woman struggling with unwanted bulges that resist diet and exercise, CoolSculpting may be the solution you are looking for.
Are you flustered with body fat in areas that just won’t go away? With CoolSculpting, millions of men and women can now have stubborn fat removed even when dieting and exercise don't seem to work. The technique involves freezing isolated areas of fat so that they perish, and it can be used in all areas of your body quite conveniently. An FDA approved the method of fat removal, CoolSculpting achieves long-lasting results with zero side effects, targeting areas such as the belly, thighs, upper arms, and double chins, as well as others. The best part about this method is that the results are natural-looking, and is a great alternative to liposuction and other invasive methods. Moreover, you'll be done with this fat removal process far quicker and with almost no pain. It's no wonder that millions are turning to CoolSculpting.
Please let me know if you have any feedback.
CoolSculpting Sample Kammie Vanover
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I found this one to be written much better than the other sample piece from Samara Khan. My only change would be her using of the word excess twice in such short paragraph. (I like to use different wording alternatives to avoid repeating the same word)
Other than that, the sample looks okay.
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samarah khan:
Are you flustered with body fat in areas that just won’t go away? With CoolSculpting, millions of men and women can now have stubborn fat removed (Melissa may not approve of that use of wording per Google) even when dieting and exercise don't seem to work. The technique involves freezing isolated areas of fat so that they perish, (same here) ( plus, I would have also ended the sentence there.) and it can be used in all areas of your body quite conveniently. (Do not agree with that wording combination as it pertains to the entire sentence) An FDA approved the method of fat removal, CoolSculpting achieves long-lasting results with zero side effects, targeting areas such as the belly, thighs, upper arms, and double chins, as well as others. (I like shorter sentences - for SEO purposes - and the reader) The best part about this method is that the results are natural-looking, and is a great alternative to liposuction and other invasive methods. Moreover, you'll be done with this fat removal process far quicker and with almost no pain. It's no wonder that millions are turning to CoolSculpting.
- I also found the writer over use of the word AND in the same sentence a few times. -
Sure thing, here's a blurb:
Give fat the cold shoulder with CoolSculpting! This FDA-approved procedure targets fat deposits that are resistant to lifestyle changes. The treatment is quickly completed, is non-surgical, and provides long-term results! An ideal alternative to liposuction, the lack of surgery means no recovery time and a quick path to the body you envision. Let CoolSculpting take care of double chins, love handles, upper arms, and anywhere else giving you trouble. Millions have already received organic looking results from this high-tech, scientific procedure. Become one of them by scheduling an appointment today!
Are you tired of the insecurities that come with love-handles, thigh fat, and extra chins? Have you been searching for the perfect path to getting your dream body? Fat can be stubborn and sometimes no amount of working out and healthy eating can get rid of it entirely. Look no further. We have a solution for you! Say goodbye to that unwanted excess fat and say hello to CoolSculpting, the highest-rated non-invasive fat reduction technique in the world. The CoolSculpting technique is a revolutionary, FDA approved procedure in which advanced cooling technology is used to safely and effectively work away at any of those pesky and unshakable fat deposits for a result similar to liposuction—but without the surgery. With over 4 million procedures performed using this technique, CoolSculpting has allowed both men and women alike to be rid of that stubborn extra fat with long-lasting results. Get your dream body today with CoolSculpting.
CoolSculpting
Also known as cryolipolysis, CoolSculpting is an FDA-approved fat reduction treatment that uses patented cooling technology to remove stubborn fat deposits that do not respond to diet and exercise. Since Coolsculpting is a non-surgical, non-invasive procedure, millions of people opting for this procedure enjoy a quick, painless treatment with little or no downtime.
The procedure, which often takes about an hour, involves freezing fat cells in visible bulges, including the thigh, abdomen and flank, back fat, upper arm, under the chin and other problematic areas. CoolSculpting is effective and produces remarkable, natural, and lasting results to help people look and feel great. Multiple scientific studies and research support the safety and effectiveness of this procedure.
CoolSculpting is a preferred alternative for men and women who do not want to undergo liposuction or any surgical procedure to remove body fat. The results of the procedure are often noticeable within a few weeks after treatment.
Yes on Kammi
Yes on Josephine
No'ish on Lucy
Yes on Emmanuel
I think Kammi is the best
How many would you like to hire?
https://www.upwork.com/o/profiles/users/_~0169b41d7b2187b204/
josephines profile
https://www.upwork.com/o/profiles/users/_~01f334e83c3020f5e0/
CoolSculpting has helped many people get the body they’ve always wanted. As one of the most popular forms of non-invasive fat removal, CoolSculpting targets fat cells and freezes them. This procedure numbs the skin and cools down the fat cells to freezing temperatures to finally get rid of stubborn fat. Within 30 minutes to an hour, CoolSculpting targets areas such as the belly, love handles, thighs, and arms without damaging the skin and tissue, making it a safe alternative to many other procedures out there. CoolSculpting carries fewer risks than invasive procedure such as liposuction and has practically little to no side effects. By breaking down the fat cells through freezing temperatures, CoolScultping makes it ideal for those who have lost weight but still has stubborn fat that continues to resist despite diet and exercise. Using highly advanced FDA-approved technology, CoolScultping will remove the stubborn fatty tissue, giving you the body you dream of without the risks of surgery.
I think that Shannon West misses the mark. She uses a couple of the same words repeatedly. But more importantly, there is a grammar error in the writing here "By breaking down the fat cells through freezing temperatures, CoolScultping makes it ideal for those who have lost weight but still has stubborn fat that continues to resist despite diet and exercise."
That should be HAVE.
I was actually doing off the clock work on Melissa's articles. But I logged in to respond once I saw you were active on here.
Besides, NFL Sunday games do not begin until a few hours from now anyway.
Stubborn belly fat, double chins, chubby thighs, and flabby arms are the confidence killers of millions of men and women around the globe. If you have been thinking about going under the knife but want a safer alternative to liposuction, Coolsculpting may be a better option. Developed by the brilliant minds of Harvard University and Massachusetts General Hospital, there are tons of great things about Coolsculpting other than the fact that it is FDA approved. For one, its results are mind-blowing. Coolsculpting’s cryolipolysis process can lead to fat-reduction by up to 25%. Also, it only targets fat cells, meaning other tissue types remain unaffected. Not to mention the fact that the procedure is so simple and pain-free it can be performed while you nap on your lunch break. It’s no wonder that Coolsculpting is quickly replacing liposuction as the go-to way of achieving one’s dream look.
- Mary Dean - Her writing is okay, but to me, it sounds too salesy.
Yes on Emmanuel
I think Kammi is the best"
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Here are two:
It comes as no surprise that just about everyone has a part of their body they wish could look better. While you can diet, exercise, and try just about every at-home method on the market, sometimes you need a little help. CoolSculpting is the #1 non-invasive fat reduction method on the market today. Using state-of-the-art technology, this process freezes fat cells at the source, ensuring you get a long-term solution to your trouble areas. Whether that’s excess belly fat, love handles, or a double chin, you can experience a less invasive alternative to producers like liposuction. CoolScultpting cuts down on extensive recovery times, with treatments taking as little as 35 minutes, and leaves you with a painless and natural looking sculpting effect.
Get rid of that stubborn belly fat and embarrassing love handles once and for all with CoolSculpting, the highly effective and safe alternative to invasive procedures. While you can do your best to exercise and diet, in many cases it won’t target your specific trouble areas. CoolSculpting changes this by using state-of-the-art technology to freeze fat cells in specific areas of your body. This FDA cleared treatment can take as little as 35 minutes and won’t leave you with the need for extensive recovery time. Best of all, it’s a long-term solution that offers a natural look that’ll give you the confidence you deserve. Whether it’s belly fat, a double chin, or even flabby arms, CoolSculping is the solution you’ve been looking for.
I did not find any grammatical errors in any of them and his sentence structure is good.
https://www.upwork.com/o/profiles/users/_~0165f7cd4753ee9beb/
Doesn't that mean they hire individuals to do the work? If that is the case then we better not use him. Because that means we will not be getting content done from one SPECIFIC person, but from whomever he hires out to do the work.
CoolSculpting
here's what he said:
Understandable. But it shouldn’t be a problem. We’re a very tight-nit group that produce the highest quality work. More often than not I’ll be the one writing your projects. You can also always get a hold of me and I’ll work diligently to keep quality, tone, and style consistent
On Jose. I agree that he may be legit since the samples look good. But my only concern is that he represents an agency, not a single person.
Most people who post Jobs on Upwork generally TICK off the "accept offers from agencies" for this reason. They do not want to deal with an entity, but a single individual.
However, it is your call if you want to give him a try to see how it works. We can always try them out on an article by article basis. I can review it, then send it to Melissa for approval.