For the treatments in the hero, Kamie , please include these:

Emsculpt
Emsculpt NEO
Emsella
Agnes RF

Let me know if you need more time for the blrubs. Thank you!

Alyssa here is the link to the google doc with the blurbs I just finished up! Please let me know your thoughts or if you'd like me to change anything :)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gvr8c6JCU1VbjEd6xohY7oSx66QpXhrprCWIh6gmei4/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks Kamie!

Ivonne do you mind looking over these blurbs? I can update once you approve. 

Kamie  these are great! The only edit I would ask is if for the first hero image blurb, can you rewrite something that has to do with "beauty from the inside out?"

Ivonne sure thing! I changed it to this: Achieve beauty from the inside out with holistic treatments.

What do you think? Or should it say Achieve beauty from the inside out, holistically.

Kamie I love:
Achieve beauty from the inside out with holistic treatments.

Thank you!

Alyssa  we are set with these. Thanks!

Thanks, ladies! I'll get these updated now. 

Hi Kamie ! When you get a moment can you please re-work the two blurbs below for the homepage? The doctor wants to make clear the distinction between the two and how she uses them. I'm looping in Melissa since I know we don't write about these a lot. 

Below are snippets of how she uses each.

Scarlet - treat wrinkles, wrinkle reduction, skin lifting + tightening on face, neck and other areas of the body.  microneedling is used with radiofrequency. this makes treatment more comfortable and with no downtime. two therapeutics in one.

Agnes - treat acne at the root of its cause, areas of the face fat reduction, facial sculpting, undereye bag removal, fat reduction of double chins. (remove anything that mentions "fine lines, wrinkles).

(this is what's currently on homepage)
Scarlet SRF

The safest way to tighten skin and achieve total skin rejuvenation in one easy treatment. Microneedling with the Scarlet SRF treats the scalp, face, and body. Lift facial skin, improve double chin and neck fat, shrink pores, improve skin texture, and more with the most comfortable RF microneedling treatment in the industry.

Turn back the clock and achieve dramatic anti-aging results. The Agnes RF Microneedling treatment stimulates tissue remodeling and triggers collagen production. Stop struggling with fine lines, wrinkles, and dull complexions. This microneedling treatment eliminates skin imperfections with ease.


Also, for Viveve, can you rework the blurb just a little to make it clear that it can be used in two different ways. One for vaginal laxity and the other for a more involved treatment that treats incontinence. Can you highlight that the machine is unique since it accomplished this in just one treatment. Melissa the doctor asked if it is worthwhile to mention how this treatment works in synergy with Emsella. Should this be mentioned in the homepage or on the treatment page?

Please let me know if you have any questions. Thank you!

Ivonne Alyssa I'm attaching the doc with the new blurbs. Let me know what you think of those! I made sure to add in specifically what the doctor asked for.

As far as using Viveve in conjunction with Emsella, I think I would just do that on the treatment page because you don't want to take away from that specific treatment's blurb, if that makes sense. But that's just my perspective. Melissa might think differently! Let me know what you think and I'll edit the blurb or the treatment page :) Thanks, ladies!!!

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Thanks Kamie!

Ivonne, if you'll look these blurbs over please, then let me know and I can update them. 

I'll await the reply about the mention with Emsella.  

Thank you so much Kamie ! I've sent these to the doctor to review! 

Kamie I reviewed these and have some thoughts on adding some other points before submitting to the doctor (sorry for being so picky, but she had a whole meeting about these 2 treatments and how they should appear on the homepage!)

Agnes:
- It is a non-surgical facelift
- NON chemical treatment for acne

Scarlet, can you please add:

-  Several immediate results

-  Reduction for stretch marks

-  No side effects

Thank you so much! Dijah  can you please add them to our blurb sheet? Thank you and hope you have a great weekend!

Ivonne of course! I’ll work on these shortly! I love when clients tell us EXACTLY what they want haha it makes it easier and you know the content will make them happy

Ivonne here is the edited version. Let me know what you think!

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Kamie  these look good. Thanks.

Kamie  these have been approved by the client. She loved it. Thank you!