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Chris Zelig, MedstarIsaac Klausnser, MedstarHector Mota, Operations Manager at MedstarJonnamae Jumawan, MedstarShane Quast, MedstarCharmae Arcayan, MedstarVania J, MedstarKamie Allen, Content ManagerSelena Vujatov, MedstarAlyssa Workman, MedstarIvonne Ackerman, MedstarElizabeth RuffaBrittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at MedstarJenna Maschino, Senior Support Specialist at Medstar
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✔ Semaglutide Unique Service Page Content

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compounded with b6 to help nausea 
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whitney.zelig@gmail.com, Medstar whitney.zelig@gmail.com  thanks for the info! I'll work on these and get it you asap!
whitney.zelig@gmail.com, Medstar thanks kams!
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Kamie when this is done, please follow-up with me. I may have one of the new hires edit the document. Thanks for everything! 
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Alyssa Workman, Medstar Alyssa  will do! Thanks for letting me know we have other editors readily available!
Alyssa Workman, Medstar 💯❤️
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Kamie Allen, Content Manager Kamie something to know:

What to expect at your Semaglutide visits:

½ hour consultation to discuss options, different diets, food allergy testing, etc.  We will be weighing the patient and measuring the waist.  Laura will be available for help/support while trialing the medication.


^ feel free to reword, or bullet 
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how we doing on this Kamie Allen, Content Manager Kamie  
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Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Brittany do you mind editing this ASAP? client is asking where it is. when done please tag Jonnamae Jumawan, Medstar Jonnamae  to create a page asap.
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whitney.zelig@gmail.com, Medstar whitney.zelig@gmail.com I am editing it now.

Kamie Allen, Content Manager Kamie quick question if you can, is this study suppose to be 2,600 or 26,000? See the last sentence. I don't see any mention of either number in the sources provided so I am not sure. Thanks for confirming!
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This source has different numbers mentioned...did the correct source get linked? https://www.nejm.org/doi/full/10.1056/NEJMoa2032183
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Sorry Kamie Allen, Content Manager Kamie , it was the other source. I found the answer to my question. Disregard the above. Thanks!
Brittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at Medstar Thank you!
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Got this assigned as a new page.
whitney.zelig@gmail.com, Medstar thankles!
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Alyssa Workman, Medstar Alyssa  Yes! Thank you for catching that typo!
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Kamie Allen, Content Manager Kamie the client came back with some feedback. I can add in some keywords, but not sure if we need to add more than just that. Namely the part about including information about torches and compounded semaglutied:   

"We will be using semaglutide troches, not just injections."

"I also wonder for liability reasons if we should be stating compounded semaglutide instead of passing it off like it is Wegovy - We compound with B vitamins – it may be B6 or it may be B12 depending on the pharmacy we use."
 
"Get fresh air outside"  Why is this mentioned as a key point?

"Should pricing be on the page?  I noticed it was left out but most places are listing their prices." We will add the pricing information too in the FAQ and somewhere in the content, I'll find out from Whitney what that is and follow up.

"There are no known risks associated with this popular treatment."
From the FAQ section.  This is not true.  Sorry I didn't catch it. I will update to this but please reword if you think I need to:  As with any medication or treatment, there is always a risk of allergic reactions and side effects. The most common side effects include nausea, diarrhea, abdominal pain, vomiting, constipation, headaches, fatigue, dizziness, or low blood sugar. If you experience any of these side effects, they are mild and resolve on their own within a few weeks. Some risks include possible thyroid tumors, including cancer, pancreatitis, and gallbladder issues.  

A few extra points to mention: 

# Laura is not a doctor, I update the content to 'provider' but please make a special note for any future content for this client. Sorry I didn't catch it. 

# This client wants to only refer to her spa as Artistry Skin & Laser, not Artistry Skin and Laser. I know there are reasons for SEO to write both. Going forward only write as Artistry Skin & Laser.

#There is NO guarantee that anyone will lose weight. I updated this but keep in mind about these kinds of claims.   

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Alyssa Workman, Medstar Alyssa am I going to make these edits? If so, I need the edited doc that was submitted to the client.

Thank you for the helpful feedback with this service. This will be great for future Semaglutide pages moving forward. 

Also, I never referred to them as anything but Artistry Skin & Laser in my copy but I'll make this note for their future pages. Also, that is really helpful to know about the person giving the injections not being a doctor so I can refer to them by the correct title. Thanks!!
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Alyssa Workman, Medstar Alyssa  let me know when you have pricing info. Also, is there any way you could get me some information on how exactly they use the troches? Like does treatment uses troches differ from injections? Anything like that would help. Thank you so much!!!
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Kamie Allen, Content Manager Kamie for the pricing: 
50 one-time consult fee
325 monthly
consult fee will go towards the first prescription

I'll ask about the torches and get back to you. Thanks!
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Alyssa Workman, Medstar Alyssa  great! Thank you! I've already edited the other sections according to the notes. I would like to get that extra info about the treatment with injections vs torches and then I think this page is good unless the provider wants any additional changes. Thank you so much for working with me on this page! I appreciate all of your help and feedback :)
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You're welcome Kamie Allen, Content Manager Kamie ! I am watching/waiting for a reply about this from the client. I will follow up as soon as possible. 
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Thanks Kamie Allen, Content Manager Kamie ! whitney.zelig@gmail.com, Medstar whitney.zelig@gmail.com  I sent Laura an email with this document to approve the changes. 
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