✔ Proof Read and Fix
Completed by Hector M.
- Assigned to
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Vania J.
- Notes
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Please go through and read all the pages, and update. There are issues are issues on every page.
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/laser-hair-removal-chicago/ - for example this talks about Laser Resurfacing in the area
Laser Hair RemovalClearing your skin of fine lines, wrinkles & age spots will let you feel & look healthier & younger. Our Laser skin resurfacing treatment rejuvenates the skin
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/facials-chicago/
What is Facials? - You could change that to Facials
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/wp-login.php
user: isaac
Pass: Letmein123#@!
I will log into the site later and see if I can help you with some of the pages. Will post the pages I work on here so we do not do double work.
I began working directly on the pages in the site.
So far I have checked the following pages
Checked for errors,
Added missing meta, titles and keywords.
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/brow-lift-chicago/
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/neck-lift-chicago/
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/eyelid-surgery-chicago/
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/facelift-mini-facelift-chicago/
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/rhinoplasty-nose-job/
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/arm-lift-chicago/
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/liposuction-chicago/
Where it says
THE NON-SURGICAL FACE
Two, when you click on it, the words disappear altogether.
See second screenshot -
I will continue working on this tomorrow.
Thanks team.
The rest of plastic surgery pages have up to date content and look good to me. Howqever, reconstruction page, we did not write the content for. Dr. Hill isnt really offering it, so he said there wasn't too much point to having it as a service page.
Good morning.
I just opened a private browser and the same thing is happening.
I made a quick video to show you what I mean and what transpired.
Thanks.
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/breast-reduction-surgery-chicago/
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/mommy-makeover-chicago/
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/c/mommy-makeover-chicago/
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/breast-reduction-surgery-chicago/
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/c/breast-reduction-surgery-chicago/
I will check the document for any others I find.
Vania can work & check on the other pages I have not already done when she gets a chance.
FYI I'm starting with these
Vania:
Let me know if you need any help.
Okay what page are you at right now?
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/coolsculpting/
"Dr. David Hill can perform the entire spectrum of treatments geared to correct abnormalities, achieve symmetry and create a more pleasing and inviting facial anatomy. From rhinoplasty, facelift and blepharoplasty, to facial implants and lip augmentation, Dr. Hill can help you to accomplish aesthetic goals that you may have previously felt were unachievable. When performed by a professional such as Dr. Hill, facial plastic surgery can improve your confidence, while preserving all that is unique to you."
Nice find.
We have to find the correct answers to the FAQs and update this ASAP.
Is it okay for me to use on this site?
Wouldn't that be considered duplicate content?
Perhaps team made a mistake when adding content. I would change to Concierge Aesthetics.
While they merged together, I do not believe we should have CIMEDSPA mentioned here. I am double checking with Chris to verify...
Thank you.
I don't think we wrote it though but maybe we did. Any suggestions?
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/health-wellness-chicago/
Nice find..
We will need to add FAQs..
Melissa, if you have them, please provide them to us so I can add them.
Thanks.
The website proofread is complete. Just waiting on the "Health & Wellness" FAQ's to replace some lorem ipsum on a page.
I've attached the full list of pages checked by myself and Hector.
Well done.
You are a rock star.
Quick question.
Did you also check for meta descriptions in the pages?
Please let me know so I don't have to check.
Thanks.
I am not seeing the Disclaimer on the Coolsculpting page -
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/coolsculpting/
Also,
CoolSculpting® is FDA-cleared to treat visible fat bulges in 9 areas of the body. Some common side effects include temporary numbness, discomfort, and swelling.
Should I add this sentence as well: CoolSculpting® is FDA-cleared to treat visible fat bulges in 9 areas of the body. Some common side effects include temporary numbness, discomfort, and swelling. ?
Good afternoon.
I had already seen the other disclaimer. However, this one has to be added to all CS pages as well.
To be safe, let me verify with Chris since this is a special client..
I will let you know.
Thanks.
Please go ahead and ad the disclaimer above as well to the page please.
Thank you for working on a Sunday with me...
Chris, thanks for adding that.
We are mostly done here. Only the FAQs missing on the page
We need to replace the LOREM IPSUM latte here.
https://www.conciergemedspa.com/health-wellness-chicago/
Just in case I have not......... .
You are Awesome!
Can you do me a favor when you get a chance?
Please remove the accordion FAQs on this page - https://www.conciergemedspa.com/health-wellness-chicago/
it has Lorem Ipsum on it.
Thank you.
I believe that was the last of the pages which needed any corrections.
Excellent work
Team!!
Thank you all.
When can we expect these typos they found to be sent?
Please let me know. I do not want to go through the entire site again...
That is unless you think that I should?