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www.hollywoodbodylaser.net - We are doing two treatment-related articles (CooLSculpting / Cooltone) and optimizing their two pages. We are running two different ad campaigns to their two different locations
Chris Zelig, MedstarIsaac Klausnser, MedstarHector Mota, Operations Manager at MedstarJonnamae Jumawan, MedstarShane Quast, MedstarCharmae Arcayan, MedstarVania J, MedstarKamie Allen, Content ManagerSelena Vujatov, MedstarAlyssa Workman, MedstarIvonne Ackerman, MedstarElizabeth RuffaBrittany Redding, Digital Marketing Manager at MedstarJenna Maschino, Senior Support Specialist at MedstarMichael, SEO +2 others
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✔ Create Cooltone Content

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Melissa Zelig, Medstar
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Hector Mota, Operations Manager at Medstar Hector Mota, Operations Manager
Done Melissa Zelig, Medstar Melissa  
I know you said not to worry about any stylistic issue. But the only thing I found you may need to change is in the following section (Highlighted and bold words)
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Are there Known CoolTone Side Effects?
 
Cool Tone is safe, FDA cleared and has a high safety profile. There have been no reported adverse side effects. Furthermore, while MMS treatments may feel strange, the procedure is pain-free.
 
There is no downtime. However, by triggering thousands of muscle contractions in each session, you will notice varying degrees of muscle soreness. This is very similar to what would happen if you performed an intense workout at the gym. However,  Coincidentally, this soreness is a vital part of the treatment and a good indication that it has worked to trigger the right body response for building and toning muscles.

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Good keyword usage by the way. 
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