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let me know if you want to review it together. I'll take a look by tomorrow or Wednesday.
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Let's schedule a time
Alyssa
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Scheduled
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Sydney Metz completed this to-do.
Alyssa Workman re-opened this to-do.
Alyssa Workman
We have not reviewed this yet, I am opening it back up.
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I will schedule a time with you for mid-end of next week.
I will reassign this to myself.
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Alyssa Workman
I am reassigning this to you
Sydney
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and I reviewed and would like you to take another go at it when you get the chance. I don't know if she already spoke with you so I am making sure you have the notes.
1. Do you have Grammarly? Please run it through something like that before submitting next.
2. It seems like the article is incomplete, the final paragraph drops mid-sentence and seems like it is missing some of the paragraph. Maybe you copied and pasted from another document and not all made it?
3. Please take a look at some similar articles on the topic to get some ideas on mirroring the structure of a blog and other possible keywords that could help.
Thanks for taking the time on this! I am happy to get on a zoom to review the edits I started on to give you an idea more about the structure to strive for, but look at other examples first. Let me know.
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Vania
do we want to do anything with this article? Want me to rewrite it a little so you can start sending it to clients?
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yeah we might as well thanks
Alyssa
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Alyssa
ummmm I cant send this like this. Let's chat.
I know
Tmw!
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Vania
I am going to schedule a meeting time with you next week since we didn't get to reviewing this.
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Brittany
do you have the capacity to take this on? The document has been started but needs a bit of work done to it with some editing and add-ins. Between 500-1000 words. Let me know if you have questions.
Vania
do you want to take a look at this document when you have a moment? You are the text blast queen!
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Alyssa
yes, I opened it but haven't been able to read through it all today yet
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Alyssa Workman
Sounds good
Vania
, I read through it and it is a lot better, thanks
Brittany
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Vania, please let us know of any final edits when you can since you have these conversations the most with clients. Want to make sure it is purrrrfect for CSMs
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Alyssa
I read it. Only a few tiny edits. Whitney read it. Created a quote for me. And it is cleared for takeoff
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Vania
does this need to go on the website or just as an access link in the CSM spreadsheet? If it needs to go on the website I'll pass it to Ivonne. Lmk
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Vania J
I have no clue. I dont know what whitney had in mind when she originally tasked it to sydney.
or
why should you text your patients
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I will reassign this to myself.
1. Do you have Grammarly? Please run it through something like that before submitting next.
2. It seems like the article is incomplete, the final paragraph drops mid-sentence and seems like it is missing some of the paragraph. Maybe you copied and pasted from another document and not all made it?
3. Please take a look at some similar articles on the topic to get some ideas on mirroring the structure of a blog and other possible keywords that could help.
Thanks for taking the time on this! I am happy to get on a zoom to review the edits I started on to give you an idea more about the structure to strive for, but look at other examples first. Let me know.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rnhXnEGkUZo5lPV_8SZfKRRhPX6o4z7VmTa16l__q84/edit?usp=sharing
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rnhXnEGkUZo5lPV_8SZfKRRhPX6o4z7VmTa16l__q84/edit?usp=sharing
Vania, please let us know of any final edits when you can since you have these conversations the most with clients. Want to make sure it is purrrrfect for CSMs
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rnhXnEGkUZo5lPV_8SZfKRRhPX6o4z7VmTa16l__q84/edit?usp=sharing
thanks super
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rnhXnEGkUZo5lPV_8SZfKRRhPX6o4z7VmTa16l__q84/edit?usp=sharing
Thanks!