Melissa , here is the first article for you. 
Please let me know what you think so that I can move forward with the other one. Thanks. 

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Damn Gina!!!!!

Sorry, Melissa .. What does that mean? 
Who is Gina? :) 

This is very good. I am pretty excited. Will you rewrite this article now? Oh, and just for versatility instead of the doctors name I put [provider] or [spa] and instead of city [location] and instead of the actual number I put [number] that way I can go in and easily update the info. Im gonna send you another assignment shortly. 

Thank you sooooooooooooo much Hector!

I am so happy you are pleased. I was worried since I am such a perfectionist. I ran it by Hemingway app and it scored a 10! So I felt somewhat relieved. 
I was constrained by the rewriting so I will go ahead and mix it up as to use the same words on the next one. 
I have the other one to do for you. Was waiting for your approval on this one first. 
Thanks again. 

I think I understand now after opening the 2nd article. You also have the same one for Dr. Edelman. 
So this before and after concept is something you used for several of them?
Perhaps I can come up with a different but somewhat similar line for future articles. That way, we can give all clients original and different content. 

Melissa , here is the 2nd Edelman copy.
I did not know if you wanted me to rewrite the first one and leave this one. In any case, please let me know if you want another copy of the 1st article I wrote for you. Thank you and have a good evening.

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