✔ NEW Homepage Blurbs
Completed by Alyssa W.
- Assigned to
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Dijah L.
Kamie A.
- Due on
- Notes
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Hi
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Kamie
! Can you please work on the blurbs for this homepage: https://www.shoremedaesthetics.com/new-homepage/
Dijah
Thank you! fyi
Alyssa
hey team! I didn't note the date change on this- sorry about that! I will do this today, unless
"take back your youth" was used a couple of times, so I reworded one to say "reclaim your youthful appearance and sculpted physique."
Also, the same word "authorized" was used twice in a row almost, I changed one to say "certified."
Those are just a couple of things I would keep an eye for, use more synonyms and watch for repetition, but great work overall! Thanks again!